Kidstown

We went to the SPC shop and I bought a five pack of Mentos. Max bought three packs of chocolates for five dollars. They were big bags. Mum bought a three pack of Boost bars. We went to Kidstown. It had lots of Monkey Bars. I went on the biggest slide I ever seen and I went down the slide. I vomited and Dad thought I was pretending.

Melbourne

The night after my party I found that the back of the car was broken. We had to go to the repair shop.

Me and Max watched 'James and the Giant Peach' and it was funny. We watched the Thornberrys Movie.

The car was fixed. Then we went to the caravan.

The next morning it was my birthday and I got a DS and 205 games and I play it a lot. One of the games is called Pokemon diamond and Pokemon pearl and I like them. I had some stickers and one of the stickers was a surfbord(sic).

The next day we went to Hume and Hovell cricket grounds and it had flowers.

After that we had lunch and I had a toasted sandwich and we went on the swing and I jumped off the swing.

The next day we saw a cow that looked like a Shrek cow. There was also a da Vinci cow. I found a palace there and did lots of tricks.

At the SPC shop I bought Mentos. Later we went to Kidstown (adventure playground sponsored by SPC). We had lots of fun there.

(adult edited) Yesterday we went to the tram station and it was about a 27 minute ride. It was fun, then we got off the tram and we walked to a bank. It had pictures of lions, sheep and rats.

We got outside and then me, Dad and Max went for a walk and we crossed a road and went to a pizza shop. It was yummy.

Then we went to a magic shop and there was a devil kit and a vampire teeth and kit. Then we got out of the shop and went to the museum that showed about Egypt. We got to see what room a person in Egypt (got buried in).

Then we got to eat some chips and then we got to play on the playground. We got home and got ready for going to Erin's house. At Erins' house we made a cafe and then went to my birthday party and I had nachos and icecream and cake. It was yummy and they got me a hat.

Mt Dandenong

On Saturday we went to Mt Dandenong with Erin and Charlie. It was fun. We went to the secret garden. It had lovely flowers, some were red and yellow and blue and orange. We played games like chasey and we went to the lookout. There was a circle that had writing and then we went to the picnic area and ate at the picnic area and then we went to the sculpture park and we had to cross a road and climb some stairs and then there was a rope. We saw the person who made them (and) are in some of them. Some of them had water spurting out of them. We went home.

The very next morning we had breakfast and got dressed and went to Alex's home.

In Melbourne

On Tuesday night we got to Sharens (sic) house and we got ot have tea and when we finished tea we got to watch a movie called the Emprs (Emperor's) New Groove two. It was funny. We went to bed.

The next morning we watched tee vee and me and Max went in to the playroom. We played teachers and then we went to Emilys house and had lunch. It was very yummy. I played Lego. It was fun. Then we went to their school. It was a two minute walk.

When we got back we went to the playroom and we played a game clde (called) run for your lives. It was funny and then we played hide and seek. Then we went home.

There was (were) two other kids (at home) cald (called) Erin and Charley.

Cuddlee Creek

We went to Cudlle (Cuddlee) Creek campsite (.) there (There) was a playground and there was (were) two see solls (saws) and there was a fling (flying) soser (saucer).

We went tow (to) the Bradmenmen (Bradman) mooseum (museum. T) there was a moove (movie) about his cricet (cricket) playing and there was a stump and a ball and herf (half) a water taingk (tank). It was fun to hit the ball. There was the DA vinche (vinci) exerdishen (exhibition) and he maed (made) ships and flotes (boats.) Some sines (signs) say do not tuch (touch) and some say tach (touch) with cere (care). and there was two mooves (movies) one was about leanrdo DA Vichey(. A) after the exdarvishen (exhibition) we went to a park and Max tor(e) his pan(t)s and there was loing(long) muncy bers(bars).

When we left the park we went and picked Mum up from Adelaide Library and me and Max now have library cards because Mum got them for us.

Hahndorf

At Hahndorf we went to the chocolate factory. I got to taste some chocolate I never tasted like it before. I liked the chocolate factory. I liked the white chocolate. I buyed (bought) a packet of white chocolate Easter eggs. They were yummy. I buyed (bought) a bar of white chocolate and a circle with 100s and 1000s on it.

We went to Woodside cheesewrights. Max and I liked the chilli cheese the best. Mum liked the herb cheese.

We went to the alpacas next. I patted the alpacas. I even got to lead one that was called Bond. Bond's fur was light.

The next day we went to Adelaide and visited a Smiggles shop and tried lots of things out.

On the way home we stopped at a river and Max fell in with his clothes on! He was cold.